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Hollywood

I’m wondering if anything is real
‘Cause things are just so confusing these days
I do not understand your foolish ways
I’m beginning to wonder what you feel
Does it hurt when you overdose those pills?
Does it hurt when the magazines tell lies?
How can you not fall down in tears and cries
I guess the clubbing brings you all the thrills.

Underneath your perfect exterior,
I bet you’re normal just like everyone
But masked underneath the fortune and fame
And people think that you’re superior
And now, my jealousy of you is done
Being you, there’s really nothing to gain.
©2008-2009 ~Creative-Soul
:iconcreative-soul:

Author's Comments

I wrote this sonnet back in January. After I heard the song 'Hollywood' by the Veronicas, I decided to make a sonnet with my own twist on Hollywood.

At the moment I'll just be uploading some of my newer-older poetry and stuff, because at the moment I have a poetry block. :shakefist: But once I write new poetry I'll be sure to upload it.

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:iconawaoke-rainbow:
Love it. And its beginning to sound so true.

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Sokka: My first girlfriend turned into the moon.
Zuko: That's rough, buddy.
*TheEndlessForest Amusante~
:icondewflower:
YES! THANK YOU! They are just normal people except they get a camera flashed in their face every ten seconds.

just so you know, this isnt a sonnet. sonnets are ten syllables each word, iambic pentamiter, and 14 lines (you got that part, and a rhyme scheme)

but i don't think it matters much

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You never just lose it, you simply let it go...

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 じしf_, )ノ
:iconcreative-soul:
Yeah, my sonnets technically aren't sonnets since I don't do iambic pentameter. I do have one poem called "Blue" that is an Elizabethan sonnet and does have iambic pentameter that I might post up, but yeah, most of the time I'm too lazy to get the syllables right :XD: On this one I was doing an Italian sonnet.

Btw I just want to say that I like the italic quote in your sig :aww:

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If it weren't for physics and law enforcement, I'd be unstoppable.

When you're close, I can't breathe, I feel sparks :heart: Say that it's gonna be okay...

:flame: :cheese: pwns all XD
:iconcreative-soul:
Thanks! :glomp:

--
If it weren't for physics and law enforcement, I'd be unstoppable.

When you're close, I can't breathe, I feel sparks :heart: Say that it's gonna be okay...

:flame: :cheese: pwns all XD
:iconawaoke-rainbow:
<3

--
Sokka: My first girlfriend turned into the moon.
Zuko: That's rough, buddy.
*TheEndlessForest Amusante~

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